Friday, January 30, 2009

Let Go

One of my initial dabbles in the world of poetry..

The time's finally come
What I'm doing can't be undone
My patience has been tested
For centuries, my talent wasted
You gave your card, asked me to call
Expecting someday, somewhere I'll fall
I may have my problems
But with you around, I cannot solve them
The situation's been this; I get stuck
And without you I suck
Times are changing and I gotta learn
The tricks that make an adult firm
Don't shut the world from my eyes
For then I will not be wise
See through my perspective
And don't be too protective
For I can think of nothing better
Than be the family trend-setter
Change's the only constant
And this a'int just a stunt
Something in your heart will stir
If not, lemme make it a bit clear
Let Go
Written early 2002.

Comments without a rating on the scale of five, will be mercilessly deleted. Thank you :P

9 comments:

Laxman.M said...

3 n half out of 5.... by d way i am strict in evaluating :P.... its a good short poem!

Dpka said...

Good one, :-) I'll go for 4/5 !!!

Unknown said...

hi.. great job.
i ll go with 4.2/5.

Priya Balakrishnan said...

Good one :) i'll give u a 3.5-4/5..
gives a vagely good idea abt de frame work of mind behind it ;)

Magesh said...

An enjoyable piece of truth.

vikrem said...

nice blogs divya, keep it up

Anonymous said...

Your blog keeps getting better and better! Your older articles are not as good as newer ones you have a lot more creativity and originality now keep it up!

Rajalakshmi said...

No comments :) How can i give u any score less than 5+ for 5 lol ?!?

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